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Post by BigxxBang on Thu Jan 05, 2012 3:03 pm

http://i42.tinypic.com/24o7mo7.png
Any cnc? I know it's uhm, bland. I'm still trying to figure out what objects to add.

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Re: Sunset

Post by Scar on Thu Jan 05, 2012 3:15 pm

This would be perfect for animations in my eyes, if you have the layers I would love them some time. Aside from that, perhaps more bushes near the middle would be sufficient.

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Re: Sunset

Post by JakTheHobo on Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:23 pm

Changing the background city to a more red / orange / brown tint would compliment the sunrise I think, as well as editing the building to the side so it doesn't look misplaced.
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Re: Sunset

Post by BigxxBang on Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:25 pm

Eh, I already tinted it, but I guess a bit more wouldn't hurt.
And misplaced in which sense, or more or less how would I edit it to fit? o-o

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Re: Sunset

Post by Yellow on Fri Jan 06, 2012 12:42 am

If you can, I'd move the building on the right about 30-40 pixels to the left. Or what ever it'd be to about the purple house. Also, It feels a little high, maybe lower it a bit? And what Jak said.
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Re: Sunset

Post by Kirimy on Fri Jan 06, 2012 3:15 am

Love what you did with the background. Looks like the shadow casted from the sunset. It's beautiful.
The house/door/hall way kinda got cut off at the top. Maybe could put a tree there to hide it away.
More objects would be nice.
I also like the titles to be thicker than a bit... I found it looks better that way. Maybe it's just me.
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Re: Sunset

Post by Felix737 on Fri Jan 06, 2012 5:22 am

Well, the only thing that bothers me are those pink buildings on the left as they stand out quite a bit while its also odd to have buildings pink in the first place though I understand why they'd be that colour due to hue-ing restrictions.
It's perfect other than that.
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Re: Sunset

Post by Rainbow Dash on Sat Jan 07, 2012 1:56 pm

I think this would look a lot better if the building were to take up more space than the background. I really like the idea behind this though, but the execution could use some work. Keep it though.

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